- NonHuman
- Re-population
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Click hereAs she lay there relaxing, the modified sperm went to work, using the host sperm cell's ability to find the waiting egg, then penetrating the egg's outer shell. Once inside the egg cell, the alien genes took over. First they devoured the host sperm cell's DNA, followed by the host female's DNA, leaving only its own alien DNA to grow into a new being. The process of repopulating the alien species had begun. Within a short amount of time this process was being repeated over and over again throughout the coming months and years, not only on this beach, but on others in California, the Caribbean, Europe, the Middle East, and Australia. Within 20 years, the alien population was in the millions and growing fast. Using their ability to sense others of their kind, they were now able to locate and reproduce with mates from their own species. Some of the males still liked to impregnate human females with their alien DNA to speed up the process of taking over entirely the planet called Earth.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoIs complete shit. Seriously, else intelligent being would make the suppositions this species did? First, that there was intelligent life in the universe. Second, that they could find one close enough to matter with?... Jesus, that math for the probabilities means any race with more then 50 IQ would not go near this shit theory with their ENEMIE'S dick...
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI stopped reading when I had to go over the word 'unit' in those stupid quotes over half a dozen times in half as many sentences. You don't need to put a quotation mark on the word every time. If you're referring to it as a unit then that's its noun, not its 'noun'
In general also too repetitive.
Doubleswan13over 9 years agoI'm interested in where you will take this re population. So far I love your story. You give lots of attention to detail, without dragging on. I look forward to reading the remaining chapters.
Riktoviabout 12 years agoYour story was pretty good, but there were some problems. To start with, you don't understand how a star will "die" and didn't bother to look it up. Stars don't burn "nucleur fuel", they burn what would be considered "atomic" or "elemental". To start with, they burn Hydrogen. The star begins to die when there is no more Hydrogen and is forced to burn Helium. Then it expands to a huge degree. When there is no more Helium, it shrinks. Then it begins to cool, but the cooling process takes billions of years. During that time it will still be thousands, if not millions of degrees.
This was also a little repetitive in your wording, but that can be ignored, for the most part. You were prone to repeat yourself in such ways as "All other space was devoted to carrying the precious cargo of genetic fluid and the devices that would facilitate it's dispersal" combined with a little later "Also in the cargo hold was the devices that would help implement the plan the genetic material's dispersal".
It could use a little work, but it's still pretty good, and a good idea.
Anonymousover 14 years agotoo many human sex machine stories getting bored of human shit lol so this was a nice refreshment great work please write more
