All Comments on 'Reacquainted Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
What a premise!

Most original storyline in a long time! Well written, too. Congratulations!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Pretty silly

Especially at the end. Why the confusion? She's committed. It's over. This mess is done.

fanfarefanfareabout 9 years ago
Cum see? Cum Saw?

A common erotic myth is the forceful executive, publicly Alpha Bull, stereotype who is suppose to secretly crave being tied up and spanked by a corset-armoured , crop-wielding dominatrix.

Butt in reality? The very few men I ever met, who would ever admit to such a fetish, tended to be third or fourth ranking (from the top) lower-middle-management sad sacks. Whose actual jobs were as retail store or fast-food managers Perpetually redundant drones in the American corporate hierarchy.

What I like about this story, how it seems to be developing, is that the characters seem true to themselves. Theo and Jen just seem to be ordinary people who are developing a not-so-unique way of spicing up their love-life, without corrupting their relationship.

I do not know where Quince intends to take this clever storyline, I hypothesize that Theo and Jen could enjoy a vanilla version of cosplay with a vanilla twist of kink.

oldtwitoldtwitover 3 years ago
Oh

Oh this is so deep, but so well thought out, sounds like a real life has been put on paper here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The level of craft is amazing. Dialogue so believable without contrivance. Deep humor and, even more important, affection for the characters. Consistent in all of the stories. Why I come back again and again. Wish you had more. FCox

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