by Quince
This seems a very involved scene Mags has created for first timers. You say she and Jen have talked, but I don't think Jen has a clear understanding of what will happen. Theo has NO IDEA, and I don't think that's good. What could possibly go wrong?
You get points for caution about the weapon. Most writers don't make it clear that is important. Even saying gun play is ridiculous to me. But some people get into it, I guess.