All Comments on 'Reader's OC Futa Ballbusting Pt. 01'

I will admit second place is not bad for a lust elf

I couldn't wait to finally read this! Im so glad you included my character, I can't believe she won as well!! You forever have my heart as an erotic author, now if I could just find someone to draw Her for me... ;)

Dear Swizzle Sizzle

Hello there, I'd just like to give you my point of view on your story and tell you one thing; I DESPISED the mother fucking lust toxin knife, I absolutely hated that thing because as soon as someone was hit with it, it was automatically game over for them, I felt like nearly every time a character was defeated, it was like watching the indominus rex's death from Jurassic world, it was completely unfair towards the opponent and was don't out if sheer luck and only really brought disappointment, I think the only person who didn't fall victim to this was Maya, and even then she was the last person I eat rooting for besides lilith who I was originally rooting for, although this story did come as sort of a disappointment on my end i have to admit i love your writing style and I am a fan of your previous work so don't take this message to heart, and also, please never use bullshit like the lust toxin knife again :)

-A fellow fan

A very fair point, sir anon!

Thank you for presenting your point of view.

I do admit that lust toxin was a instant K.O., I will watch out for that sort of thing in the future.

Hope you enjoyed the story even a little ;3

-Swizzle Sizzle

that the elf's balls would've had some more permanent damage, like popped, or even just been shooting blanks or something... but it's a good story with a lot of nice things going on. A+

i would like to see some balls pop in the next story. that was always the one big problem i had with rich's stories and now yours.

obviously if you feel as though it may somehow lessen the quality of your writing then don't do it. but if not, i would love the inclusion of some of your charcters losing a testicle or two in your stories

I'm sorry, but unfortunately the rules of Literotica prevent me from inflicting permanent damage on any characters.

I'll see what I can do, maybe some regenerative powers could do the trick. Speaking of which...

A new story will be out soon, so hold on to your cocks! ;3

damn that sucks you can't write permanent damage , it would have been pretty hot if a combatant lost a ball or maybe a dick

btw you ever heard of bottomless knights? women or futas (mostly women) fully armored all over except for the crotch, butt and sometimes stomach

be pretty good cbt material

OMG! Saber should totally return in part 3 or 4 now that she only has one ball!