All Comments on 'Reading the Defense Ch. 03'

Really great story.

I'm falling in love with this series. Keep up the great writing!

I have absolutely fallen in love with these two. They are wonderful together and the passion is... wow. Keep it up, I can't wait to read the next chapter!!

They are beautiful.

"Next time, let's have a sleepover at my house."

Let's think about that. Why have two houses when one is all they need? I think Samantha and Gabe are too madly in love to live apart.

I'm enjoying this series--got to read on to learn what happens next.

Punctuation is needed. I learn a lot of new sexual terms on Literotica. When a character says “let’s go coach” during the middle of a sex scene, I’m going to pause the story to google the meaning of “going coach”. When I got no results, I realized that the guy in the sex scene is a coach. I laughed at myself. A simple comma, as in “let’s go, coach” would have saved me some time.