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Click here"That will be nice, won't it." Julie smiled, watching as Sylvia kicked her heels into Junior's sides, and he broke into a trot.
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That's all for Book Three. I hope you enjoyed this story. Book Four is in progress, and I'm really sorry, but I have no idea when, or if it will be posted...
Please comment, the feedback helps me a as writer, and to be honest, the positive re-enforcement I've gotten from other works just makes me feel good.
Feel free to criticize, I can't grow if I don't know I'm not doing something right...
All characters engaging in sex are over 18 years old.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoA new character, Wilbur, is introduced in this chapter, which certainly makes relations between the characters more complex. An excellent plot and great character development are given in this chapter, although the love scenes are much too few and brief.
ukdukeover 6 years agoAs much as I have enjoyed this section I don't like the Wilbur character. He just does not fit.
The "family" setup is a fairly sophisticated one. None of the members strike me as being stupid. Then into this emotional China shop you bring a dancing bull!
Sorry but it doesn't quite fit. Makes me think you are setting us up for a fall any I don't like it!
RibaldWriterabout 8 years agoAuthorI've been trying to figure out why I can't get this story going, and you may be right, I got off the rails with the original story.
But the story is really about the girls, so maybe I'm not that far off from where I want it to go. The story is about growth, and change, and all 3 of the female characters have grown as they found new things about themselves.
I'm still playing with the storyline, and you may notice a new character in the first part of Book4. Another is coming in the next chapter.
As I've said before, I write for me, so if you don't like my offerings, there are hundreds of great writers on Literotica. I won't take it personally if you go read their work for a while...
Anonymousabout 8 years agowhy are you deciding to add more men to this guys relationship with three women and then split up your initial premise of him being with these women? this story went to crap part way into book two and you could have fixed it, but now you cant.
RibaldWriterover 8 years agoAuthorBook 4 is is in progress, but has been sitting untouched for a while. I guess I'll have to pull it out and work on it, because Wilbur becomes a stabilizing influence on the family.
