All Comments on 'Real Love Never Dies Ch. 03'

I liked the first two chapters because it seemed like you had a slow build going but this chapter you just dumped everything. They're suddenly boyfriends now while skylar still seems on the fence about the whole thing but more willing to have sex with Kyle. And then two brothers randomly show up from Europe. You should take your time to build, explore and explain the relationship between the two. Its a very complicated one an if done well can bring the characters into 3D wherreas they are 2d now. But I still like your story and want to see where you will take it

Skyler should never have forced the issue until he resolved the issue of his denial about his feelings. Right now, he wants his cake and to eat it, too. No wonder people stereotype bisexuals as oversexed sluts who'll never be able to commit, or keep from cheating.

I'm also hoping this doesn't end up being another relationship with people pretending to be in a committed relationship while f*cking half the eastern seaboard, "but it's "okay" because they know about it and share the experience. It never works. Eventually someone will stray, and one of their good times will end up being more important. Sharing is not always caring. Sometimes it just drives a wedge between you, and just plain fucks everything up.

and I can't wait for more!

I am absolutely in love with this story. I love the names. Cant wait for more

I can relate to this story, had sex with a friend, felt so right.

You said in the beginning that you are changing the story from gay male to incest/taboo, and introduced the older brothers after 3 - 4 yrs of no new submissions. Kyle and Skyler are now boyfriends (but in an open relationship). I can just see one or both of them getting hurt. But I'm curious to see where this story goes.

I think you have fucked up a great story.

More please