All Comments on 'Real World of Wrestling Ch. 01'

by feelingbrave

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Sounds like fun

Not bad for a straight guy. Described how I felt first time (nervous and excited) pretty well.How much was real and how much fantasy?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
no ending

this story definitely needs a happy ending

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wow!

Wow! He really dominated that guy and wound up really on top!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
hot, sweaty, oiled up, muscular, young men- naked and sliding against each other- makes for great story- there should be more like it

(I threaten to make him cum right then and there, )

-and that's bad why? and he almost splooged just from having his balls licked?

-it's obvious the gay guys wanted to play sex games with the straight guy- why didn't the straight guy just say: 'guys if you want to suck my cock, all you gotta do is ask?'_

-he shouldn't have let the one guy's face out from between his butt cheeks until the guy licked his ass- as payment to be released and punishment? for being caught.

anyways- it was fun and hot- and would like to read more like it- thanks for sharing with us

loverofintersex1loverofintersex1about 8 years ago
Please!

Finish the job! Make him suck you -- you earned it, and he'd love it! And his friend too --he'd love to join in, and your ass is available, all slick and ready! I need page 2!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A critique

Well written save for one sentence in which you used the personal pronoun "I" instead of "me." The action described was more than adequately sensual and the effect was as you hoped on this reader. May you not only continue to write, but may your matches be as exciting as the one you portrayed.

TeenTopTeenTopover 4 years ago
Winner fucks

Wrestling has always been an extremely erotic sport right from the Greco-Roman beginnings. Stroking cock is a normal form of combat, and the loser of a match is obliged to present his arse to the winner for penetration.

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