All Comments on 'Rebecca and the Librarian'

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sirhugssirhugsover 6 years ago
What about Hubby?

He missed seeing Rebecca with Eric...who she did not have permission to fuck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Who the fuck is Jade?

Who is this Jade person of who you speak?

The_O_StateThe_O_Stateover 6 years agoAuthor
Feed back is appreciated

Thank you, your feedback is appreciated and read. I have fixed what was found, and hope that it makes your reading more enjoyable and fluid... ;)

netgnosticnetgnosticabout 2 years ago

Really great story!! A suggestion for a quick fix - several times when you used the word "site" it should be "sight."

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I like to publish stories that turn me on, but aren't specifically tailored for the masses...

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