by AnonymousPerv
I particularly liked the name choice using anon like anonymous and de sade like the world famous marque de sade who is considered the creator of sadism. that was a stroke of brilliance .
Flat and unsatisfying, especially the end. In fact the only kick is that lame last line.
And, from a reporting point of view, had she publicised the fact that he would only do an interview under the those circumstances then that would have been rather bad news for the antagonist. She was supposed to be a struggling journalist yet she did nothing to stop him from taking control of the situation, almost as though she had never conducted an interview before...
Very cheesy too. This wasn’t meant to be a serious story was it? I didn’t check.
Tess
That is the whole point of the story! Both of them eventually gave in to their basic urges, and they each (or should I say BOTH) eventually indeed DID fuck him or should I say let him fuck them, as I feel that was his intention all along, after having given him permission to do so, possibly even giving him permission to film them both in their submission to him, giving him a further weapon to use against them in case they sued him. He could simply produce the videotape of them, giving explicit permission to use them in any manner he so chose, at any time he so chose, meaning he could summon either woman to his estate, and she would have to show up, dressed as he requested, or else suffer a pre-chosen sexual penalty (OF HIS CHOSING.)
Tess, none of my stories are "serious" in any way whatsoever. Fiction is fantasy, and in my particular case, sometimes utterly absurd. I have written one non-fiction piece that I haven't published here, and even it isn't serious. Just reminiscing on some fun times.