All Comments on 'Rebekah's Passion Ch. 02'

The story concept is great. You need to flesh it out. Right now it is just wham, bam, thank you mam. Combining the 2 parts would have helped, but it still would need More body to the story. Think of the 2 parts as a conceptual outline, now fill it in.

A great read, and I dig how you get the details in but it's a bit brief. Take your time with the next chapter, explore a fantasy maybe.

With that said, I loved it. You got five stars and a favorite from me.

All aunts and nephews should experience such uninhibited love