All Comments on 'Rebellion'

by MsMahler

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Truly Amazing

Probably the most INTRICATE and well designed stories on this board.

I am anticipating for the next chapter.

Great grammar and usage.

PLEASE CONTINUE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wow

amazing. please continue

MsMahlerMsMahleralmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks folks!

Glad you enjoyed. Sady, for the time being this is going to be standalone. Might be a Part 2 sometime in the future but not anytime soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazingly good

Great insight into the mental aspect of domination, rather than just the physical. Wonderfully written. Thank you so much for this story.

MsMahlerMsMahlerover 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Glad you enjoyed

gurrenninjagurrenninjaover 8 years ago
Bravo

This story was amazing no sex but still showed so much in domination and more than physical . When he dreams about his friends I couldn't help thinking of the song from les miserables after the revolution where he's in the tavern singing about empty tables

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I will take you before the Emperor ........

If already she is that close to him - why not do the deed herself ?

But what a pity this author has not written more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
love it

Please write more like this! I hope there's a continuation

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