All Comments on 'Rebirth Ch. 02'

Read the first two chapters, and I must say that this is shaping up to be a great series. Hope there's many more to come!

Thank you for your comments. :) These are first few attempts at such writing. Part 3 is already out so check it out!

The idea was good but research is a good thing to. The demon is a succubus but you refer to it as a he. A succubus is afemale and an incubbus is male. other than that i enjoyed it. keep going.