All Comments on 'Rebirth of the Beyonders'

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thatlonewolfthatlonewolfover 11 years ago
great story

i liked it a lot :D

mass effect with plenty of futanari's

looking forward to a sequel

although a tiny remark: may i suggest a second read-trough, the day after you finished your story? there were a couple of spelling errors and sentences that were difficult to read.

i know my english isn't much better, but i hope you can make sense of it :P

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great!

Loved this ME story! Can't wait to see what's next, and who else joins in. Tail and Jack please!

ilegoilegoover 11 years ago
Please continue

Great story i think this story was on my favorites on one other site

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