All Comments on 'Reborn'

Phenomenal story! I would love to so this continued and become a series. Keep up the great work!

This was fantastic and I would love to read more!

I don't think (s)he will have a problem finding a girlfriend anymore. And boy will she be in for a shock!

1.) very interesting story, you're telling a transformation story, but this site doesn't have this category, so agreed, it's a bit of an oddball category wise

2.) very interesting with the butt-vagina, I would have pegged the guy for a full transformation down there into a futanari, but still... cool

3.) if you want get some ideas or just see what others have done,google "nifty gay" and you should get some kind of url with nifty in it and that has a huge transformation category section. Might have to click around to find it

4.) please continue this series, I'm very interested in reading more.

your story is amazing it gets me so turned on. keep up the good work

Keep it up. One of the best I've read!

Wicked, perverted, nasty and naughty. Just he way I like it!

You blew my mind!

Kudos on having an outstanding imagination!

Awesome story - I'm very interested in reading more. Please continue!

Hey, I was just rereading this story and I have decided it's one of my all time favs. Not often do I find a story with mind altering, trangender, shemales, self sucking, sci fi AND tentacles! I would have been thrilled with one or two, but all of them? A true gift.

So it goes without saying, more of the same would be nice. I would like to find out if the hero (or is it heroine now?) goes out and has someone else satisfy his/her urges. Also what becomes of this creature? Does it have more sinister plans? Perhaps some of it's 'victims' could meet for support and orgies! Does our hero still like women or might he like men? Or some sort of mix?

Really just anything more with these themes would be a great addition.

This was definitely one of the best and kinkiest stories I've read. Please, please do a sequel!!

This single story is unlike anything I have ever read. It's kinky, yet intriguing (from a literary standpoint).

More than that, I feel that this story cannot be defined, like the word 'joy'. And I got to experience 2 rounds of "joy", which usually doesn't happen (at all).

Looking forward to reading more of your work!

There is a very interesting story by the title "changling" which you may enjoy...the book which this is in is entitled "hotblood, tales of erotic horror" just thought you would enjoy something similar..

Keep writing you have a definite talent

Thank you so very much for all your appreciation! It inspired me to write both Reborn: Charlene's story, and a second chapter, which will has just been submitted and will be found in the Transsexuals category.

Again, thank you all :D

I SOOOOO WANT THIS TO HAPPEN TO ME just wanna have pussy and everything lol

I have just posted a new story that is similar to this one in that it is a transformation story with mind control elements, but in this one an average white guy is transformed by his black best friend into a the spitting image of a female celebrity. Because of this it landed in the Celebrities category and might therefore not catch your eye.

It is called Chalice of Change

http://www.literotica.com/s/chalice-of-change

This is such a turn-on, I can only read for about ten minutes at at time without taking a break. Thank you for helping me cum!

See above ;-)

Thank you for posting this.

Great hot well written story.

this made me really horny , oh i wish wish that would be me. will read more , thanks for this story

The way you write it is quite hot but I definstly would have been way more into it if the girl transformation included swapping his cock for a pussy OR if he\she were to fuck some chicks with the bigger better cock.

Also the problem of looking like a girl but being equipped as a man severely limits his\her dating possibilities. Only a story I know but I always think through what happens after a story and that effects my judgement. So 4 stars for excellent writing but not 5 due to limited ending.