All Comments on 'Rebound'

by leapingfox

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nice

It'd be great if u continued this story.

Ken NitsuaKen Nitsuaalmost 16 years ago
Okay setup,

pretty believable, in fact, but the payoff is kind of rushed. I would have liked more details. Best, Ken

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great read

"...the same cute little ass I'd caught glimpses of in the locker room..."

MY favorite line

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