All Comments on 'Rebound'

I want to know more, quick enjoyable first chapter!

I really liked the psychological development of this piece. It left me wanting to know how their relationship developed, and how she reacted to his obsession with Jenna. Did she manage to banish all thoughts of her? did she try to compete with her ghost ubsuccessfully? What happened from here?

nicely done.

Now, GIVE ME MORE! :-)

Ahh, the psychological possibilities. Can't wait to learn more. Thanx for this story.

Jenna really did him in. He can't even get through one night having sex without thinking about her.

This story has a pretty good premise as others have stated but its pretty rushed and the sex scene skips around to much and just doesn't flow properly... I think if you fleshed it out more (pun not intended) and took your time it would work so much better.

she hates children, where are you going with her? she finds out about your

child and hates you. you had sex with her and she will really hate you.

you are not a very nice person.