by papershotglass
I can't wait for the next installment. I hope it comes out soon :-)
Love the serious, it's seriously my favorite, but honestly update sooner! ; )
Wonderful stuff!!
i loved it... i loved all of it. doug alice heather how they met everything. i would love to see what happens next please don't take too long i look forward to the next chapter. congradulations on an excellent story.
I'm begging you to please continue this story. it's truly amazing and I can't get enough of it. I've read it 3 times. PLEASEEEE
i loved the story buy didnt really liked the ending i think it could have been done a different way, the story was to spontanious to follow at some points..
I really enjoy the story of Alice and Douglas, and hope there's more coming soon.
I love your writing and this story. It is sensual and captivating. I do hope you write more. I will be watching :)
Did you say patiently? Sorry, no cigar, I want this story now! I want to know what is going to happen to Alice and Doug. I want to know what complications arise from the union of a vampire king and his human consort. For that matter, I want to know what complications would also arise from this pregnancy. After all, she's human. What kind of child will it be, a damphir? And how will a human sustain this pregnancy - will she suddenly start to crave blood (shades of Rosemary's baby)? How will the rest of the vampire kingdom accept a union between a human and vampire? Do they only see her as a breeder? Will she be too vulnerable in the vampire world, someone attacking her to fee or kill her or kidnap her to gain something from the vampire king? Thinking about that, this baby is the heir to the vampire kingdom... come on, girl, start writing, nobody said we had to wait "patiently" for this story...LMAO
I like them together but I'm a little iffy on Douglass seems like he just wants a child for an heir even though it makes no sense cause he lives forever he don't need one. And Alice seems to actually want a baby for less corrupt reasons