All Comments on 'Reclaimed, Remade (Scarlet Queen 01)'

What an interesting premise. I enjoyed your short sharp story. Thank you!

nice premise, would like to see more

I like the concept of the story, the internalization of the hero's struggle. I loved your opening "crawl". It gave your story an old fashioned, pulpy feel. But there were a lot of typos and grammatical errors. I'm not one to let a few typos get in the way of a good story, but you had kind of a lot. You should seriously consider finding an editor on the Editors Forum to review your next chapter before you submit it. You have a good story going. Don't let easily fixed mistakes hold it back.

I absolutely love this story and find myself rereading it at least once a week or so. I truly hope you continue this one or make more like it.