All Comments on 'Recumbent Ch. 01'

Unfortuately this seems to stop mid paragraph, no hint of ending, just a dead stop.

Readers, the abrupt ending is intentional. For one, I wanted to give myself the opportunity to write a second chapter. But more importantly, the ending of this particular scene isn't as important as the events leading up to my situation. This is a true story and I wanted to highlight the uncertainty in my mind of what was going to happen. I was as odds with myself. Which side would win, the angel who feared what would happened if I was caught, or the devil who was begging me to continue? This isn't the best written story, but I hope you can appreciate the predicament I let myself get into of a battle of sensibility versus unbridled pleasure.

Stupid ending.

please make a second chapter