All Comments on 'Red'

This is well written and it is apparent that you are a person of reasonable intelligence. This is NONCONSENT and should be posted in the NONCONSENT category. Even EROTIC HORROR would be appropriate. Other comments may blather on about fantasy blah blah blah. Yes, it's fantasy (even with its similarities to occasional news stories) yet that does not stop it from being NONCONSENT being posted in a CONSENT based category. And yes, it does matter.

I agree withat both anony that this is in the wrong area

Are you going to do a sequel, you say she didn't find out until much later that Avi was rich, so did she escape, or become a rich freak? So what happened in the end? I liked it, lets face it, it is fiction.

Great story .Waiting for the continuation .

I appreciate all the comments - good and bad. I am new to this world and do not exactly know the 'labels' that society uses. It is fiction for me and I enjoyed writing it. The whole story is destined to drive in different ways than perceived in this first part. I hope you all stick around and continue reading.

Thanks a lot!

Looking forward to reading more, great build up so far.

This is a great set up.. Really keen to see you run with it <3

Thanks guys for your love. Do check out the second part. It was unexpected, even for me, to see the events turn this way. But the heart wants what it wants! Show me your love and your ideas and lets see where we get

I want to know what haopens next.

Call the police and have him arrested and move far, far away. This was disgusting.