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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

"Truth be told, in hindsight, I was only in it to satisfy a sexual need."

So the affair was just a physical thing.

" I was depressed and confused, I was losing a friend and confident ("confidant") as well as a lover"

So it wasn't just a physical thing then, but an emotional relationship as well?

" But then something clicked, it was the sex I needed not the man."

So it WAS just a physical thing? I'm confused now.

You have a bunch of commas where you should have periods: "As the days went by, I became distracted(period). Every man on the street presented a sexual opportunity..."

I suggest you check out punctuation.

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I'm a redhead who likes to chat occasionally. I like to get turned on by sexy strangers who can tell me what to do. tell me your passion i'll tell you mine. no pics and no voice so please dont ask. Recently I've been much more horny for women than men...