All Comments on 'Red Lipstick Confidential'

This so good! A great story to read!

More of it too please;)

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Well done! Only negative, the ending seemed abrupt to me. Seemed doesn't necessarily mean it was.

Very well written story, you seem to have a good knowledge of the film world.

Great story and very sexy.

Thank you for sharing!

In keeping with your show biz theme: Bravo! Encore! A well written story with a great plot. Surely you can add to this, either with Sienna and/or Heather or perhaps new characters. You know, like in True Detective or American Horror Story. Please give us more.

Oh my goodness! I need some alone time after reading that one 😉

So erotically descriptive, I have some extra lip gloss for both Sienna and Heather. Might just have to use it myself, mmmm...

Five stars, plus the one's I saw after finishing....

Just an observation - if a pool is going to be used then it is easier - and cheaper - to keep it heated than starting from room temperature everyday. Other than that, excellent.

"Will you be here?"

"Maybe, maybe not."

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The questioning look disappears. Feeling alive and vibrant, with new confidence and energy flooding her mind, spirit and body she decides it wasn't a question. A cloud darkens her eyes. With an emphatic downward tilt of her head, she tells Heather. "Be here!"

Really good,

Superb story so far, I love the tugging of emotions in sienna.

I like stories with hero endings, for me this beautiful story is missing the Oscar 😊 , but I loved it…great writing talent

Loved it, I think you made a mistake when you mentioned the internet btw