All Comments on 'Red: The 2nd'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Press freaking enter!!!!

Separate your dialogue so we know who's talking when other than that it's fucking great!

gogreengogreenabout 13 years ago

not bad.

will be worth reading more.

jkneusjkneusover 13 years ago
Ok I'll bite,

Not sure where this is going, but looks interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Not too bad at all, its certainly got my interest. Keep em coming.

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