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All Comments on 'Redemption Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I like it...thrilling and mysterious.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good

Love the twist of thankfully not making a shit love vamp story, however I recommend reading your story out loud to yourself as sometimes you have to many commas and it reads quite jarringly

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 8 years ago
OOOOHH!!

I am liking this.Though, it would be interesting for Jacob,and the lady ended up together.

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