All Comments on 'Redemption Ch. 04'

Awesome chapter again. Im giving you 5 stars again.

not happy that Lucien is bi - It is disappointingly emasculating because he is the hottest of all the angels and the transexual stuff is so not sexy (hey, that's just my opinion!) plus it makes me jealous for girl Rayne -but the story is original and all of your characters have so much depth. Looking forward to the next chapter. the wait is grueling so Llevana, don't be cruel!

just what i needed to perk me up after a long day..... leva..... lucien is jus priceless....again another chapter well written... but i wud love lucien to like boy as boy not boy going fully girl for him.... lucien at some point has to get over his revulsion to male touch and i wud love it to start with boy rayne

but anyway.... another chapt well written n waitin patiently (sort of) for the next installment

ButThat Was Totally Hot. It Was Brilliant To Make Rayne Go Into HeaT And Have Her Female Anatomy Come Out. The Question Still Remains On How Much.Can't Wait For more.

Now that we had that scene with boy Rayne. I'm so excited for girl-Rayne. I want to know how powerful she is. I mean, there must be more to her right? She was the chosen sacrifice to summon the dark angel back. She was practically the battery they used. Plus, I like how she makes Lucien unravel without even trying.

I'll be waiting with bated breath for the next update

I have read through all of your stories in just a few days and I love this world you've created. I'm going to constantly check back for updates on this one. Look forward to seeing Lucien and his Raynes develop more.

Lol!!!!