All Comments on 'Redemption Ch. 11'

by LevanaHyll

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LevanaHyllLevanaHyllover 9 years agoAuthor
For those new to Redemption

This story was originally set in SciFi, but due to dubious circumstances I have switched it over to Group Sex. It takes place in an alternate universe of my making so if Star Trek/Star Wars/Avatar-like stories are not your thing you may not enjoy this one. It is part of the Alpha Angels series:

AOD

Dark Prince

Angel of Retribution

The Witch and the Dragon

Dark Angel Redemption

To those returning to Redmption, I may not keep it here either as I've set my sights on Novellas and Novels, but let's see how Redemption does here and I'll ultimately let you know what I decide. Thank you for your patience :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great!

Thank you so much for all your work on the series. I find myself here everyday looking for the next chapter and here it is. The world you created is really amazing and I'm so very grateful that you share it with the readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Aaarrrgh!

this was a teaser! 4 pages?!? I have been waiting for this chapter forever!! Very well written and original (as usual) but you are mean for making it so short. I have really ended up like this story a lot more than I thought I would since the bi-stuff is not my thing, but the story is so very engaging... you take turns in this story that I don't expect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I'm your #1 fan

Keep going your the best 😁😘👍love your books 📗📘📙📔📖 Jenny

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
bummer

Cliffhanger. Will it be another month wait again? Going cray cray.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
"swueezed....SWUEEZED!!!" -Megan

How long had he run after the devils? He swueezed through tight cracks wondering how the creatures had managed to scramble through there.

....squeezed.

and UH OH ....BABY :U babies? guess we'll find out later

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllover 9 years agoAuthor
Chapter twelve

Group sex group was awesome! I got a pretty good score and received a satisfactory amount of comments and emails asking me about what the reading order of this series is. New fans, that's always good. Though I enjoyed the folks in this genre (more than the cheaters in Scifi) the next chapter is going into Erotic Horror because of the amount of pretty dark shit happening now. Lots of fights with devils, poor Boy is....oops! Almost spilled the beans. Anyway, I just uploaded the chapter so either Tuesday or Wedensday it should post. For those of you on Facebook, I'll upload the chapter preview there as always. Hope to see everyone in Erotic Horror as we all continue to follow Lucien and his Raynes on this epic journey-to hell and back. See you on the other side. LH

KyriaeKyriaeover 9 years ago
leva honey

Im glad I found you. .... why oooh why did you drop that little bomb shell and just left me hanging.... boy... preggers.... oooh lordsss..... please let him be safe

taco1085taco1085about 7 years ago
wow,

this story is amazing..... so many twists and turns.... thank you....

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