by DavidRoths
Another writer here also uses the phrase, "fucking hell" almost constantly in lieu of other exclamatories. Makes one wonder.....
fucking hell is British like bloody hell also used in Brit porn especially older guys
I stumbled a bit at first, I had thought our prime characters were in a High School gym, so I was confused by references more specific to an open to the public fitness center. A sexy tale, I wanted more,.. and was often so involved that I wanted to insert my own dialogue ( your lines were fine,..) I wanted to high-jack your story and run with it, kudos! I was hooked, more please!