All Comments on 'Reformation Ch. 20'

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AllosaurusRexAllosaurusRexalmost 15 years ago
Looking forward..............

........to reading "The Strong Family" I have enjoyed this & the "Big Changes At Home" series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
motherhood for all the women

let them multiply and build their family.

denverjohndenverjohnalmost 15 years ago
ideas for stronge

they have Cat already with baby so that is an interesting one.

I think it could be interesting if Heather moved out to begin with them and had an exclusive slave training center at the estate.

Owen growing the law firm into something that is good would be awesome such as an environmental firm or something

I also think opening another spa could be very cool maybe more of an exclusive deal where they can really make some cash.

Growning the family.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Love it

This series has been awesome to read and follow along with. As for a possible idea for the next chapter in this family series, Might I suggest - the new law firm and the housing staff are all into the "scene" and they are all slaves, now without a master and thats part of the reason Mr. Anderson wanted to get rid of it so badly and so fast. Now owen not only picks up and new lawfirm and estate but more slaves to be dealt with and that could follow the heather idea as well. Just a suggestion.

This has been a great story and I have loved it from the start!

Which ever way you go with it I'm sure it will be just as good.

thanks

cobrahawk

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
kids

you never said what happened to mouse children.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
New Series

Hey this is by far my favorite series here on literotica will you be adding another to continue the Owen story? I'm sure everyone on here would appreciate it good job and keep em coming.

larrywanderslarrywandersalmost 14 years ago
It's been over a year

Will the "Strong Family" series ever be revealed??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent series so far

So far I have read the 2 sets about 30 times each and am severely hoping for the 3rd set in the series since it HAS been over a year and I am slowly losing hope that it will be coming out

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
son dominating father!!

The best part of this series for me is to have son dominating father. For those who like this, check out

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=341711&page=2.

Pls have more men submit to Owen. I think that wld be the ultimate demonstration of power. (not homosexuality)

And pls start the Strong Family series Dear!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

this is definately the best story on this site. please put up the next series as soon as you can.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
cat

why didn't cat tell about her being with baby. the story was great by the way. but after the hell dee dee had to go through for doing something behind owens back it seems only right that you should have gotten it out in the open before they moved

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

dude love the whole story line how ever its been two years but give us an ending good or bad

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Anyone know what happened to the author? It's been well over two years since he posted anything. Was looking forward to what "The Stronge Family" would be like.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Hope that the author is still around because I'm looking forward to "The Strong Family." Please keep writing more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
continue

for the love of god please finish this story you have weaved that makes me so happy.

C_frommnC_frommnabout 12 years ago
The Stromge Family

When will it start Appearing?

Cant wait to see how everyone reacts to Rosina's Pregnancy.

farthmaulfarthmaulabout 12 years ago

Any chance of the story continuing? Man, almost two years without any activity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
continuation of the Strong family

It should be exciting when Rosina disclosed her pregnancy. Hopefully Mouse will get pregnant again and it is time for Veronica to also get pregnant. This series was great. Hard to stop reading - it took 3 long days to read the story from beginning to end. Please continue with the next chapters. Makes one wonder if going to their new location - the family might acquire a "brother" master and any new slaves. If the family became interested in a new couple or the couple that Owen met at Heather's and they decided to move also across the country, would Owen be willing to share his slaves with another man? Or would Mistress Red, with Owen's permission add other slaves? Many possibilities???? REALLY LOVED THE SERIES!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Please contine

I read both sets of stories from beginning to end and loved reading your words.please continue your story for this family as I really enjoyed reading them so much so I read them all in 2days

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
The Strong Family

Have read both series and was really intrigued with them am looking forward to the next series I think that Rosina telling the family about her pregnancy should be a big part of the opening series and Veronica and Rebecca both getting pregnant as well

ayieayieover 10 years ago

are there any of the strong family series???

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
keep it coming

this story just keeps getting better each time I read it.

TREKnRayTREKnRayover 10 years ago
The Strong Family

I would like to see the older women pregnant, Mistress Red and Bella. I understand that first generation children of incest are not as great a risk as if the practice continues for several genaration.

How about another incestous family or more than one living in the area where they settle?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Strong family

Any one know if it was posted on another site?

Any one know how to contact Polyman?

Would love to see the story continue...best by polyman, but maybe someone else could get permission to carry it forward......

So many years waiting for this one...too many good stories just dropped

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Your third set of stories is very, very much anticipated and needed....

you have started an incredibly sensual, sexual, and exciting series that so many of us hope you will continue. I will ponder on this and send you thoughts when I can.

Lonely_readerLonely_readeralmost 10 years ago
Such a shame

You stopped writing

qwertycheeseqwertycheeseover 9 years ago
stronge family

Hope there will be a third series of this family. If you wrote it please post it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice work

The whole series is a great story line, please keep it up. The only critical comment I have is the lack of length and detail in many of the sex scene's. I know that would extend the length of the story line, but it is what this is all about.

richbwrichbwabout 9 years ago
unexpected

very good story im not usually into any kind of bondage stories this on had a good feel to it hope the next series is just as good as the last two were keep up the good work

greg72greg72about 9 years ago

I have several idea's for 2 - 7 chapters

1 The obvious start is Cat and her pregnancy. This could be split over 2 chapters. First the fallout and possible punishment when they find out and Second they welcome her back and all is forgiven.

2 The move to the new law firm.

A chapter about each of the following

3 Frank and Ms Young. They could get together and Ms Young becomes his sub.

4 Heather.

5 Bella's ex Husband.

6 Mouse's ex Husband and her 3 children.

Possibly Mouse gets the children and the ex husbands end up at Heather's.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Are you Dead or what ??????????????

Its been five year or so since you finished the Reformation story. What gives, I mean to say you did post that you were going to follow up with the Stronge saga. This is what pisses me off with so many of you writer, you never fucking finish the story and leave us poor reader frustrated wanting more. There is no excuse for not finishing it. unless your DEAD that is. But anyway. Brilliant story 5 starsssssssssssssss

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
The Stonge Family

Why have you not written the follow up as you said you were going to as it is a very good storyline

nashman1000nashman1000almost 9 years ago
Please continue

I just finished reading this last chapter today. So disappointed to see it has not continued. After 5 years - I assume it won't go any further.

This type of story line with the slaves/master is not usually my thing. I found the story by accident. But, the more I read - the more I was hooked.

I enjoyed it immensely. I wish it would continue, and I hope you add to it one day!

happymuffinhappymuffinalmost 9 years ago
Pls

for the love of god please countinue

happymuffinhappymuffinover 8 years ago
You have a lot of Fans

You have a lot of Fans waiting for you man i hope you havent forgoten about us :)

Leotardstights69Leotardstights69almost 8 years ago
Great story

I just finish last chapter looking forward to next chapter keep them coming

BIGGUY1956BIGGUY1956almost 8 years ago
Superb!!!!

You did a great job with both of the series and I look forward to reading the next series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow...

BDSM isn't my thing but it were brilliant series. Realistic that it was last wrote 7 years ago so next series Strong Family may not happened but overall, i was truly enjoying it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More

Was hunting all over for the next series you mentioned. Sad that I was unable to find it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

What happened to the Stronge series

OpthimusOpthimusover 7 years ago
I would really like to read the Stronge series!

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Still.

It seems you have an abundance of support to continue on but since it has been so long I understand. You have created a great piece with both of the series. It was a delightfull read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Please continue. I kept reading just to find out what happened to everyone even though the foreshadowing basically told you. The naughty bits were just some extra treats along the way. I am excited to know what happens with Cat and her baby. Will Dee-dee have one? What about Mouse's other kids, will she be able to se them?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
How I think the story should go

I really want to know what happened with the Rosina's kid the first thing they do after getting to town is poke around to see if there is anything like HEATHER's and if they don't find one they start one up call it BIG RED's named after his first slave obviously at BIG RED's Dee Dee finally finds a girl who is willing to submit to her and this time she has her masters permission to take her on as her slave because she remembered what happened with Mouse and doesn't want that to happen again and then they will the kids that she the new nanny and that she would be moving in with them and when he gets to the new house it has 15 bedrooms 10 full bathrooms and a half bath The grounds also has a guest house a third that size is because of the kids Mouse gets full custody of her kids and then you'll all have at lease 3 kids from Owen mouses first set of kids are not counted the satyr kids that she has the only one that does is the one that lost her her marriage

spoiler22mspoiler22mover 6 years ago
"The Strong Family" 

What ever happened to "The Strong Family" series. I've been waiting for 7 years for it! Come on now, we need to know what else happened.

nsebuildnsebuildalmost 6 years ago
What happen to the Strong Family series

Good story please post the next installment.

messenger83messenger83over 5 years ago
Please write the strong family

Hi please writh the strong family. I love the store so fare about owen and his slave family. I really want to know what happens to them.

Taskmaster42aTaskmaster42aover 5 years ago
Hope to read more stories soon.

I may have missed it but did Rosina ever reveal her pregnancy ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
More please

You can add with Owen starting a training center and bring in the waitress and his tease from his dream

gfrhgfrhover 4 years ago
Too bad

It's sad that the writer didn't finish the series. It's been 9 years since this was posted. So, I'm pretty sure we'll never see the ending. I don't understand writers that post stories that aren't finished. Some could say that it's finished, but there are things that weren't addressed. IE: Cat's pregnancy.

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 3 years ago
Fuck you

You better be dead and fucking buried. That’s the only excuse I’ll except for not continuing on with The Stronge Series if not, your an arsehole ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
You took a well deserved Break

Perhaps it is time to continue. Your following is legion and must not be ignored. There are a host of kinks and perversions open to this subject and yet to be explored. Your writing is exceptional and your creativity yet unplumbed. B&D, water sports, etc. please! Take a break, but the time is now over and a multitude is waiting to indulge in your limitless creativity.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wish you would move to your new series for this group . So many pieces need a closing. While the story is sexual it has a nice flow of a different kind of family that truly love each other.

Patoche95Patoche95about 2 years ago

Je viens de finir tous les chapitres de ces histoires : Big Changes At Home et Reformation J’ai vraiment adoré l’histoire. J’ai cru un moment que Véronica allais soumettre Harold et que du coup Rebbeca aurait pu "récupérer" ses enfants, mais je me suis trompé. Je me doute qu’il n’y aura pas de suite promis, vu le temps passé, quel dommage.

nyteramblernyterambleralmost 2 years ago

Dam I was so looking forward to more of the story. But it seams that will never be. I hope whatever has kept you from writing is a good thing for you and yours and if not peace to you and thank you for your time and hard work.

TREKnRayTREKnRayalmost 2 years ago

Now I can relax. I have been on these two series on a non-stop binge.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I loved reading these 2 series... but now I'm waiting for part 3... please continue this

Roland58Roland58over 1 year ago

I loved both stories plz continue

Mango2021Mango202112 months ago

Is this on hall of fame

Aussie1951Aussie195110 days ago
Great story BUT

But nowhere near finished, too many unanswered questions like what happened to Mouses children and no mention about his sister’s pregnancy to Owen. You should’ve continued on with this story under the title The Stronge Family

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