by Tickletorture
The sweetest most alluring story I have ever read. I really realated to Di and her desire to please Beth. I loved how you seemed to pull from some personal feeling for the story.
You make me want to be Humble, Docile and Obedient. I am sure you could make me do bad things (wait.. you already have)
Very nice. I would try and include a tiny bit more sexuality with all the sensuality.... not a criticism, just a personal preference. But I loved the build up and enjoyed the raw nature of the emotions. Keep writing
I loved it so very much the way it felt like it was really happing, you have such a talent at writing, I do hope you add more to the story Beth and Di are starting a wonderful love between the two of them I would like to see more of it. I just wonder if once Beth leaves the rehab center will her and Di keep in contact.
A bold premise with passion, edginess and emotional truth. I hope you will continue it!