All Comments on 'Rehab and the Nurse's Submission'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Really nice! I hope you continue the story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Damn you are One Amazing Domme

The sweetest most alluring story I have ever read. I really realated to Di and her desire to please Beth. I loved how you seemed to pull from some personal feeling for the story.

You make me want to be Humble, Docile and Obedient. I am sure you could make me do bad things (wait.. you already have)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Well done

Very nice. I would try and include a tiny bit more sexuality with all the sensuality.... not a criticism, just a personal preference. But I loved the build up and enjoyed the raw nature of the emotions. Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Very lovely and such a great read

I loved it so very much the way it felt like it was really happing, you have such a talent at writing, I do hope you add more to the story Beth and Di are starting a wonderful love between the two of them I would like to see more of it. I just wonder if once Beth leaves the rehab center will her and Di keep in contact.

CeliaisAlienaCeliaisAlienaabout 14 years ago
Lovely and intriguing

A bold premise with passion, edginess and emotional truth. I hope you will continue it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Why did You stop?

This deserves more.. Please..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
great story

Great story, woul make a good series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

not much ... no purpose, no resolution

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