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Click hereIn moments our legs were intertwined. We each had one knee pressed between the other's legs as we continued to kiss passionately. I couldn't stop myself from grinding my pelvis against her knee and thigh. She was doing the same. The room quickly filled with the scent of our passion.
"I want to taste you again!" I gasped, breaking free from her lips. "Only this time directly. Is that okay?"
"Yes, please!" she moaned, rolling onto her back and spreading her legs invitingly. "I've been imagining this forever!"
"You and me both," I growled softly as I fell on Sophie's center. She used both hands to pull my face against her opening and I drove my tongue deep. Eventually she stopped directing my mouth and let me take over, although her hands remained twisted in my hair.
Sophie tasted even better this way and I did my best to cause her to offer me as much of herself as she could bare. My faced was soaked by the time she finally came. She fought it for as long as she could, but when I pushed two fingers inside of her and rubbed the sensitive spot there while thrashing the top of her opening with my tongue she lost it completely. She seemed to be trying to crush my head with her legs as she squeezed them together, but I didn't mind because she was filling my mouth with the best nectar I'd ever tasted.
She was limp afterward so I crawled up the bed and laid down next to her, pulling her onto my shoulder. I played with her long dark hair and kissed her forehead once, just enjoying the feel of her against me. I was certain she'd passed out until she sighed loudly and began working her way down my body. I wanted to tell her that she didn't have to, but my own need stopped me.
"Oh, I've been meaning to tell you. I really like your tattoo," she said as she kissed it lightly. I opened my mouth to thank her, but she chose that moment to kiss further down so instead I gasped. I couldn't help myself.
Guys had done what she was doing before, but in their cases is was always just until I got excited enough for them to take care of their needs. Not only was Sophie a lot better at it, but it was clear that she wasn't planning on moving until I was done.
I watched Sophie as she did her best to bring on my release. Seeing her eyes looking back up at me with love and desire as her tongue drove me to the brink and beyond was something I'd never forget. I didn't last half as long as I hoped, but my orgasm was the best I'd ever had. Pretty much everyone with Sophie was like that. The moment she slipped two fingers inside of me I lost it completely.
Afterward, she moved up and lay next to me. I pulled her onto my shoulder once more despite how exhausted I felt. We kissed briefly before she reached down and grabbed her covers, pulling them back over us.
"I want to sleep like this if you don't mind?" she asked.
"Why would I?" I replied. "I want to wake up with you in my arms and then I want to spend the entire day exploring the rest of your body." Sophie kissed me once more before settling on my shoulder.
"That sounds like Heaven," she sighed, snuggling close. I kissed her forehead once more as she drifted off.
I found myself thinking about the plan I had when I first came to college. Maybe it had worked out after all. I mean, the whole point of it wasn't really about fitting in. It was in trying to find a way of being happy with myself and my life for a change, and right at that moment I was as happy and content as I'd ever been in my life.
"I love you," I said softly, thinking Sophie was already asleep, but needing to say it anyway.
"Love you too," she mumbled in reply, snuggling again. I squeezing her close with the arm she was laying on. That's when I realized the secret to happiness, at least for me. It was having someone you love with all your heart saying those words to you and meaning it.
This was not what I expected. I came here for erotica. And then spent the next hour or so reading this.
I loved your story! The characters were fun… I really think you got their dynamic down perfectly!
Great story!
Is there a sequel, what happens next?
Please.
Thankyou for this lovely tale!
Great story, 5/5. But the punctuation, to me at least, made it a bit choppy when I was reading it
I much prefer these long stories, you do them so well but you do need an editor and given the amount of sex and how quickly you get to it in your other stories I can see why some are frustrated. However, that said, I loved this, you write so well and create such interesting stories I'm going to read more. Thanks so much.
Really, really good story, normally I’d be complaining about spelling and punctuation, but tbh this story swept me along to the point I didn’t notice the errors. The Author has managed to convey the hope of a new start, then the hesitation, confusion and worry that their one true friend may somehow end up hating them, it’s that emotion and frailty you’ve somehow captured, like lightning in a bottle. I’ll agree with other comments though, it definitely warrants another chapter telling the aftermath of that nights events and their coming out to each other’s families, I’d also have liked to have seen all her old “ghosts” laid to rest, although that was mostly taken care of in her face off with the would be rapist.
Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz. 5⭐️
Great story, but the grammar mistakes were too much not to ignore. Have you thought about hiring an editor?
Not an overly erotic story, but so well written, with amazimg character buiding. Needs a part 2!
Well written story with excellent build up and lots of teasers. Great monologue, btw!!
Complaints? Dropped sentence here, misplaced word there … and the sex was hasty, too fast. You gave us nine and a half pages for a build up and less than a quarter of a page for their coupling. What a rip off.
The way it’s written … I just read one of my mothers Harlequin Bromance novels. I don’t know if that’s what you intended, but it’s a big downer on a site like this.
Thanks for the waste of time.
Loved it, you nailed the feel, sensation and the love aspect, it was a great read
Thoroughly enjoyable this can only be worth 5 stars. More please. Stories like this have a life of their own and deserve a continuation. Please make this come true.
I don’t follow what persona the MC was for the two years after summer with Grandfather. She’d decided to clean up and move on from druggie/drunk/slut Mia and get her college entry-worthy grades, but later references seem to make no distinction between how she behaved in the first two years of high school and the last two.
Great story I loved it despite the lack of proofreading/editing that that plagues many of your stories. I would love a follow up story with Sophie and Emma meeting Emma's grandfather and him helping them come out of the rest of the family. With his stories of Emma's grandmother he would understand far better than he r parents and could ease the impact on the parents. Please keep writing and find an editor proofreader you are very talented and could really do a much better job with a little help from a couple sets of eyes. I know that when you write something it is hard to catch the little things. I have read several of your stories and gave them all like this one 5*
This is the best short story I’ve ever read. The erotica of it could’ve used a bit more… erotica. But overall INCREDIBLE, Thank you for bringing this to my life.
Very good story. I "kinda sorta" loved Emma. The more I thought about the character, the more messed up she must have been as Mia. As the story starts, Emma hasn't fully developed. Making her separate herself form Mia a work in process. A lot of angst, but well played. Will have to see what other stories you have written, and read this one again. Gave you 5 stars because you earned it.
Almost did not make it to 3rd page , but that's about the only critic i can formulate.... that i should mitigate as it proves very useful to understand Emma's / Amelia; Dont care about typ mistakes .... just loved it , thanks
I'm male and loved it. Don't care about grammar and spelling (not an English major) but the story was great.
I (male) love this story; it is one of very few that I have re-read several times. As many others have said though, it is sadly let down by too many typographical and other editing errors.
A nice story... Writing is rather clunky and needs editing (bear instead of bare, etc.). And some stretches seemed over-long. But overall a gratifying and pretty sexy story.
Your character development is phenomenal. Really well written story. Thanks
Almost clicked out of it on page 2 when I found out it was 10 pages long. Glad I didn't. Probably best character development I've read on this site. It was more of a novel with sex in it than most stories on Lit. I didn't notice all the editing mistakes that others mention. Didn't affect the story for me at all. Please keep writing on this site.