All Comments on 'Rekindled'

Please write more.

Great beginning, can go in so many different ways..

write more for this is so good and needs to continue.. you are really good at this..

Please continue, I love how you have now drawn us into them.

OMG!! please continue.

Please continue with heather and Petra, heather falling more under Petra's spell and now her daughter submitting to Keira. So delicious.

pls continue

I love the emphasis of the mind control I'd love to see more

I've got the next section outlined, but I'm waiting for the correct frame of mind so that the heat stays high. Hopefully soon, but I've never been timely with second parts.

one of the best!!! this is pure thrill

great story! would definitely like a continuation, especially one from Riley's perspective

I love the whole - Dom Mother (Dom Daughter) - taking over the Sub mother and soon to be very sub daughter. You can sense the peril they both will be in - and that the removal of the previous commands that were given to Heather will be reinstated soon. I rated it a 5 - and like most of your previous comments - would love to see a few extra parts to this story.

(emails from the Literotica site aren't working for me - feel free to respond via regular email - strywrter7@aol.com) thanks!

I like the Riley and Keira part, very well written and like who it's built up but I don't like it combined with the Heather and Petra element, made my buzz die and just made me sad and squirm, and not in a good way

Keep this story going for at least 10 chapters or say a story series, it's sexy and the domination of mother and daughter is a real turn on for many readers and makes for a nice story line.

More please

I can read some of ssl influence, please add more.. I was so close to getting off. I need more.

Love this stoy.

Please write a part 2 to this! Amazing Work.

wish you had continued this story.

There's more, it's just not published yet. It will be once I find a little time and an editor.

The story is really exhilarating! I can't wait for the next chapter, whenever it comes out.

Looking forward to it!