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by fiammetta

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soularsoularover 14 years ago
Great beginning...

I really enjoyed this story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great.

Good story, don't make us wait for the next one to long.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Really good!

I can't wait for the next chapter! Hopefully it will be soon!

LitRiterLitRiterover 14 years ago
I Humbly Bow

...to your wonderfully descriptive narrative. I would only suggest a break of some sort when you shift scenes. It can be disconcerting to suddenly change environs and situation with no warning.

Masterful. I look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Positive comment

Love the story. Want more. When is part 3 coming?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lousy, incomplere.

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