by litfan10
I really enjoyed reading this. The progression was very plausible. I liked the fact that the ending was so sweet. Great use of humour as well.
Such a great change from the normal reads...dare I ask for more?
Hey thanks, you are very welcome. It was fun to write. Glad you enjoyed it.
Sweetness!! Thanks again for all your help! You made it much better than I would have on my own.
Thank you petskunk. I did write this episodically to get a stronger path to the end. Glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, I love throwing humor in there now and then. Thanks again
Hey arrowglass my friend! Thanks for finding this story. If I wrote another to this that would take even more time from The New Deal. I can't have that! I do enjoy writing sweet, little romances for the contests so you can expect more of that - but I really do need to get to the next chapter of my regular series. Thanks again!
This was so unexpected and delightful. It brought a smile and more than a couple chuckles. Thank you!
Live through? Not so much. I'm glad they too were laughing at the end.
I have reason to believe that bondage is not a thing this couple should explore in more detail. A great humorous story. There are probably hundreds of authors on this site. Out of all of them, I have added only two to my Favorites. You are one of them. This story is an excellent reason why. Five stars all the way.
Thank you, That's why I write these contest stories- smiles and chuckles. Glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for your comment - yeah not something I would want happening to me either. Glad you enjoyed it!
Wow, thank you so very much. I am extremely touched and flattered. Of course, now I have to read your work and unclej's. I am so glad you enjoy my work! I will beg to differ that there are many, many fine writers here every bit as good or better than me, but I certainly appreciate your comments.
Happy writing to you and thank you so much again.
We (read story to wife) totally enjoyed your story. Wife laughed so hard she peed in pantys. Your story is believable also, it sounds like something I would see at work sometimes. Thanks for the laugh, wet wife and great sex!
...it was rip-roaring hilarious! Another poster stating this should be behind "Larry, Curly and Moe" wasn't far off! Safe to say I loved the humor and while I can be fairly klutzy myself, I almost can't imagine two people being that much so together; I certainly cannot imagine the compounded mortification of repeated trips to the ER and the explanations they had to create not to end up beet-red for a week--to say nothing of explaining burning down the house to police! I would have hoped after the second handcuff disaster that they would have given up on it all together. Still cute, though.
Thanks - you completely made my day with your comment. I greatly appreciate it. So glad you enjoyed my story and reaped some benefits from it.
Hey Com! Thanks for reading my story. Glad you enjoyed it even somewhat! I figured three times was the charm. Happy writing to you my friend, see you in the AH and thanks again!
LOL!!
This was an excellent story. Very funny & I could see myself in al of those situations.
Now that was funny and enjoyable. In 2 pages you developed characters and a well thought out plot. You left me with a better ending for my day. That was really good writing. Keep up the good work. Thanks for taking the time to share.
Hey jetosh. Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully you never imagined being in the hospital parts.....
Thank you so much for your kind words. It was my pleasure to write and share this. I definitely plan on continuing with sweet romances in the contests. Thanks again, you made my day
I stopped reading at "nipple clamps". I will never consider creating intentional pain romantic. A loving husband doesn't do that!
Charming characters in a humorous short story can be very difficult to accomplish. You began with a simple trope & spun it into a wonderfully funny view of lasting love & how experimenting doesn't end the same for every couple.
Well done! I look forward to reading more from you.