All Comments on 'Reluctant Veronica'

This is an outline for a story, its rushed, fill out your stories. It certainly didn't make me want to read anything else by you.

One minute it's Mills and Boon or Jane Austen and the next it's Hustler.

I think you simply like to be cantankerous.

Hopefully there will be more to this story, just got started. Other anonymous comments seem off target from my viewpoint.

who the latest anonymous is???

I will email you Andre.

Regards

Cantankerous in the UK

I think this is a perfect little romantic vignette.

The writing could have stopped at descriptions of the kiss