by Kaysome
Excellent story. Well written, realistic, and certainly one of the better efforts to grace this web site. I hope to see more of the same in the future.
This story was very well written, it really surprised me that such good stories exist on literotica. This one was a romantic love story, but at the same time, highly erotic. Thanks for sharing, that was great!
I like how you went into so much detail and wrote it with a good deal of sensitivity, which made it so credible. You didn't go for the stereotypical guy kisses girl, guy gets inside girl, they have sex on the kitchen table, end of story.
Although the rain made it a little cheesy, it was wonderfully written. It sure got me wet!