All Comments on 'Remember the Time'

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aRandom1aRandom1almost 7 years ago
Mind Control Erotica?

Fantastically well written as always and a great concept but in such a short story you've only included the briefest nod towards the actual erotica. I was a little disappointed as a result.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Back to the Old School!

It's nice to see a story with an old school song title for once, especially since we're coming up on the eighth anniversary of MJJ's death (8/29/58 - 6/25/09 NEVER FORGET)...

GigglingGoblinGigglingGoblinalmost 7 years ago
Simple and Clever

I really liked the story, but to be honest, I get derailed because every time I read the title, I think of the wrong song. Specifically, I think of "Remember Those Times", the joke clipshow song from Gravity Falls.

Remember those times

Don't forget to remember those times

Just remember

to remember

thooose times...

DrBlack919DrBlack919almost 7 years ago
brilliant

fantastic story, well written and captures the ideas perfectly in words.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Powerfully suggestive

A big fan of your work. This is even more subtle and short than usual, yet powerfully suggestive.

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