by JukeboxEMCSA
Fantastically well written as always and a great concept but in such a short story you've only included the briefest nod towards the actual erotica. I was a little disappointed as a result.
It's nice to see a story with an old school song title for once, especially since we're coming up on the eighth anniversary of MJJ's death (8/29/58 - 6/25/09 NEVER FORGET)...
I really liked the story, but to be honest, I get derailed because every time I read the title, I think of the wrong song. Specifically, I think of "Remember Those Times", the joke clipshow song from Gravity Falls.
Remember those times
Don't forget to remember those times
Just remember
to remember
thooose times...
fantastic story, well written and captures the ideas perfectly in words.
A big fan of your work. This is even more subtle and short than usual, yet powerfully suggestive.