All Comments on 'Remembered Acceptance'

Can you say d-i-v-o-r-c=E.

Who needs to be neutered

Why the fuck u write is beyond me? If it is to get ur jollies off …better would be to write it for urself and jerk ur mini penis in the bathroom!

Don’t waste netspace

"Some words you never really forget."

Some stories you definitely do.

Wow garbage all the way till the end, men like this are better of killing themselves, men like this is y women think they can do what ever they want to anyone,

I liked it. More please

to the divorce court wondering Why The Fuck it all happened. TK U MLJ LV NV

This one should have been forgotten before it was written!

Unbelieveble. Sorry this guy is a loser.

I agree with @secretsal...This is so bad that we must forget it fast...1* (were are the negative ratings when we need them?)

There's a lot of stupid reasons authors come up with to justify a man staying married to his cheating wife.

What we got here (the wife is good in the sack)... yes, that's the most common one. And I'm pretty sure it is kinda realistic- I can definitely see a lot of men being that weak.

Still stupid, though. But hey - it's on him, I guess.

Bottom line: pointless story was pointless.

pathetic wimp story 1*

It’s a ugly, stinking and disgusting pile. May not want to step on it.Avoid.

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Too short to really rate. Of course, some of the early-bird LW vigilantes are out to sling their arrows. They know, even tho you don't give us an ending, that the man is going to be a what they call a cuck, one even saw that the man had a tiny pecker.

Lol. Fuck off.

stick to your day job

Being a Brit you more than likely post these in LW JUST WIND PEOPLE UP. But this is pointless as your scores are aweful so put the stories like this else where to get decent scores

JJ

Just another worthless writer to quickly forget.

Another 10 minutes of my life I'll never get back - why do authors continue to publish this drivel

@secretsal you probably have the best response for this.

Burn the bitch!

Pis poor story. No guy would just sit down like that unless he was so much in shock he could not react. Then he would tell his wife to go down to her lover's house and have fun. at least divorce the bitch. disgusting, unrealistic story.

cuck story

no cuck tag

auto one star

Post-coital promises are invalid.

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I definitely wouldn't have shaken his hand, he'd be lucky if I didn't deck him.

Congratulations!! I thought your last submission was the worst piece of crap I had ever read and nothing could suck as bad as that one. Sad to say I was horribly mistaken.

Well written, stupid fucked up story, but well executed. Divorce the cunt and then take her as a fuck buddy, if she’s that good. Never, never, never “share” a spouse!

"Yeah, go get him and bring him down." And when they getvrhere, he beats them both to death with his son's baseball bat.

I wish there was a way to score comments, 'cuz this one from secretsal deserves a 5:

"Some words you never really forget."

Some stories you definitely do.

Apply a sense of humour and it wasn’t a bad story. Or should that be a sense of the ridiculous. Take it seriously and you’re doooooooomed!

Simply terrible. And the bad part was that the story was completely unfinished. Making him i cuckold was ridiculous.

Terrible, if I wasn't so old, I could remember the author's name and never read anything else he wrote.

Can't think of anything good to say so 1 star from me.

Aw...I kind of thought it was cute—like a puppy that falls over its own feet and chews on pillows.

This is a first sentence. Paragraphs, please. Pages. Dare we ask for motivations? Justifications? Reactions? Consequences?

So many directions to go.

Hell no. Shake his hand, I’d shake his Weasley neck.

Puke-worthy.

.....the writing was good....but....Honestly my friend I am very confused! Lol. Am I wrong or did you just have the end sentence in mind and you wrote the rest of the story to use it that way? Not bad, but not all that good. It just seemed surprising given your regular quality.

So well written and confusing with no idea which way to go. 2 stars and please keep writing.

Came back to bite him on the arse, didn't it?

dump the slut

Well, that was really dumb. Throw her out and follow Mr. Jackson with a two by four.

there is no ending

Worse than horse shit. These stories should be monitored and stuck in some cuckold category so we don't waste our time. I'm just about done with this site anyway.

She knew she married a worthless, pathetic and idiotic bisexual husband.

I truly hope you arent as stupid as your stories and less gay than the man you fantasize being when you leave that closet.

Hopefully your dates get a better sucking than what we get from you as an author.

When the wife's "look" caused MC to acquiesce and shake Mr. Jackson's hand and make nice, we all knew the game was up. It had been up long, long ago. He was betrayed the moment the wedding officiator said, "I now pronounce you husband and wife". The rest is like a bad baseball team: playing out the string.

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You know, surrendering is not bad in and of itself. What's unforgivable is surrendering without a fight, without receiving terms. Instead, MC capitulated unconditionally. Done.

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Decently written, although I didn't like the outcome or either of the characters. Try writing the male lead with some testicular fortitude, next time. 4/5.

You are a very talented writer but have read some of your other stories and they were extremely poor. I’m hoping you can sort them out. But at the moment it looks like you need help with your stories you need a hero and there is no other than saddletramp1956 he can help you get back on track. I know it’s a big thing to do but your stories are going to suffer. You are a very very talented writer who at the moment has lost his way . Please please take that step and talk to him he won’t bite ( I don’t think 😀) . He just the person that you need to help you understand the problems with your stories. If he can’t help you understand the problem then he will know who really can help . But please please get the help you need with your stories. Then please then show me and everyone how really good you are.

"When we are married." WTF. Whose wife was she?

Utter rubbish story, and the bitch even more utterly rubbish.

Kill her at the first opportune moment the plot allows.

That is, in my opinion, a very poorly told story. It is possible that you know people in your circle of acquaintances who are as idiotic as your protagonists, but I hope that is not the case for you!

Nope…

This got passed the editor?

Jackson should not have left the house walking, but the cheating bitch should have.

Terrible cuckold/slut wife story. He should have kicked Mr. Jackson's ass, not shake his hand. And he should have kicked her slutty ass out the house too. Wasteful tale.

Interesting plot concept.

He needs to watch his wife get her cunt filled by Mr Jackson then clean his cum out of her cunt.

The Story is incomplete. as it sits he just found out the wife is sharing with a neighbor and wants top spread the cheer. personally I would be astonished, and either kick her out or Move out on my own and leave her with what ever she can come up with.

Only in LW. LOL

Great little story! 5* ~~ JB Edwards

Anything - and I do mean ANYTHING - said post-coitus cannot, should not, AND will not be taken seriously by any self-respecting man. That's something that even eighteen years old nowadays are quite aware of.

For a grown-ass man to even entertain the idea that what his cheating wife did may be OK, because she has always been a great lay, and she sorta made him promise that 'sharing her' was fine three decades ago just after he just nutted inside her...

Nope. That's rubbish. GTFO with this nonsense.

To suggest that he’d accept her proposal, based on his off the cuff response from years ago, is absurd. I also don’t see why he would comply with her demanded ‘polite goodbye’ to mr Jackson.

A premise like needs more work.

Are you kidding me? This is an incomplete story. Kick the bitch to the curb. This is the first story I have read of yours. Are they all this stupid????

Ugh.

Very stupid.

I sure hope saddletramp redeems this story

Well the real question is - to be a cuck or not to be a cuck?

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2*, for not immediately kicking her ass to the curb, since she has tasted the poison fruit.

Well, I guess we have a new entry in the "Got His Brains Fucked Out" sweepstakes. Still, shaking Jackson's hand on his way out is a bit over the top.

A start to wet the whistle, now comes the sequels.

Another unfinished story. 👎

@KRD19254,

He is already a cuck.

Too much crap like is is published.

WTF? I'd give him a hand, balled up to a fist, right in the solar plexus followed by as many blows and kicks until I got tired out.. Anything that happens to the MC after shaking the hand of the man who's cucked him is richly deserved

I stand by my comments from five months ago. Not to mention that she's already done it four times with np confirmation of his willingness. He;s a cuckold, but he's only a cuck if he doesn't get his head out of his ass and tell her NO. FUCKING. WAY!!!

When he commented on the "wetness of her kiss," I was sure that Jackson had just come in her mouth.

good start

Such BS. LP

'Mr Jackson' would not have got out of the house without a few missing parts.

Why do all of you pussy authors have to churn out this cuckold garbage. Do the world a favor and find a different hobby because you sure as hell can’t write. Go suck some strangers cum out of your wife’s cunt

THIS is one of, if not the most awful, stories I have not had the pleasure of reading, on LW. How anyone could ever think this is normal AND make a story about it, and submit it, is beyond this guy's comprehension!! A BIG -5 * for it.

Why is she still in the house? Maybe he can’t stop his wife being a Ho, but condoning it. And the shaking hands?

There is a very

Good reason this scores so far below even an average rating. In fact the entire portfolio here has really abysmal scores. Guess we know why…

No

Thing is, this is one lousy cuck story.

This made me gag

Total crap

What total filthy crap!! Please stop writing, by the shit scores on all your other stories prove mostly that you write crap!