All Comments on 'Remembrance and Hope'

by jonthechaosman

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TimothyMTimothyMabout 10 years ago
short, sad but sweet

I loved the idea about group families, not just for the fun sex, but because it makes sense to have multiple parents for the children when there is such a danger of loss of life.

You did well with the contest theme, even if it was almost cruel to have humans finally get their act together on saving the planet from their own stupidity just to lose it after all.

patientleepatientleeabout 10 years ago
The group family concept was interesting

I wasn't surprised by multiple wives, but 2 husbands in the family is different. Good story.

sopharoonessopharoonesabout 10 years ago
such a complex backstory!

im a little saddened that this isnt a much longer, multi-chaptered story! i love sci fi and could have quite happily read way way more. however, the erotic side? nah, soz, im afraid i wont vote for you coz its not that i did or didnt like it espesh , i just want u to write more! selfish, i know lol please let me know if u do!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Too quick

Way 2 much territory 2 cover in a 1 page story.

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