All Comments on 'Reminiscence of Passion'

It was Hot Hot Hot!! Great detail and fantastic ending. Need a towel now! smiles

Teddi

outstanding 1st effort. sensual and entertaining. Looking forward to your next one. Magi

This is alot better than the original i read a week or so ago. obviously im not able to speak about the literary quality, but the imagery is stunning, keep on writing Ma'am, your gonna be famous before you know it!

Thats was so hot, I love it. You did a wonderful job on it.

Love ya, Passionate's Darlin

I thought it was written very well, the build up could have been longer and detailed. The sex scene was a mixed bag, I loved the action, but just as it got to the climax, it died. Overall, I think it was a very good start, and can see this writing style devolving. Must say that you have the right mind to make a better than average or even great writer on here. Just a bit more detail surrounding the scene, not just person A, doing this to person B, and you will have one of the best stories on Literotica. Gotta say it's a fresh style, that can be devolved into a great art. Keep up the writing and show us what you can really do. Dream Weaver

Beautifully written and SO hot! Keep up the good work.