by Mygypsy
I mean it is a GREAT story and noramlly I would LOVe it right up my alley. But I was kind of hoping Ren would save Sky. I mean I REALLY like sky! That and I hate HAWK for how he treats her. I would LOVE to see one of them take hawk to task and just keep Sky as a slave but as a well kept on NOT a punching bag.
Great start. Looking forward to see what happens to the mysterious girl who is being treated badly by their friend. Keep writing.
We get to learn more about our maybe hero....he seems just to be just a regular guy....and he seems really nice...so why did he let Hawke beat the shit out of Sky? I'm sorry, I love your style and I think I am addicted to Stolen...just to see where you're going with it...but Ren? He's no hero