All Comments on 'Renee'

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ktmccollktmccollabout 14 years ago
Great!

Any story with a tech writer as a protagonist gets an automatic thumbs up. A story written as well as this one, with a great plot, description, and pacing, gets another one. Well done!

Athena_e19Athena_e19about 14 years ago
Defying odds

Wow- I'm surprised to find this story so enjoyable (and yes, arousing too). It defied most of the typical norms we find on this sight- impossibly hung men, supermodel forty year old women, and never ending sex. Thanks for the pace, for the romance, and for the great hook up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Keep it going

been there, done that many years ago and let it go. bad mistake, never been happy sinse.

PennLadyPennLadyabout 14 years ago
Nice

I'm not usually much on cheating spouses, but she has reason. This was very nice and I, too, was very pleased not to have supermodel perfect people finding each other. Nicely done and the emotions were expressed well. I like where it ended because I can finish it myself, although I'm sure I'd read more if there was more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice Start

You are doing well but you need to continue the story and yes I like the variation from a man hung like horse to one just under normal. Please continue.

don87654don87654about 14 years ago
Rings don't stop real love

Renee was just starved for real love. It would be nice if she returns for more love-making from this guy even if she goes off the fucking Pill!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Tears

I started crying midway. I wish I met someone as Kyle to love, he deserves it. Your writing is sublime. I'm lost for words and tears of complete empathy for both of them are streaming down my cheeks. You moved me greatly. Thank you !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Bestest

Best story read on literotica, amazingly awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow this is an incredibly moving story, incredibly bittersweet, hauntingly beautiful and extremely erotic. An exquisite vintage

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