by ms72vt
Any story with a tech writer as a protagonist gets an automatic thumbs up. A story written as well as this one, with a great plot, description, and pacing, gets another one. Well done!
Wow- I'm surprised to find this story so enjoyable (and yes, arousing too). It defied most of the typical norms we find on this sight- impossibly hung men, supermodel forty year old women, and never ending sex. Thanks for the pace, for the romance, and for the great hook up!
been there, done that many years ago and let it go. bad mistake, never been happy sinse.
I'm not usually much on cheating spouses, but she has reason. This was very nice and I, too, was very pleased not to have supermodel perfect people finding each other. Nicely done and the emotions were expressed well. I like where it ended because I can finish it myself, although I'm sure I'd read more if there was more.
You are doing well but you need to continue the story and yes I like the variation from a man hung like horse to one just under normal. Please continue.
Renee was just starved for real love. It would be nice if she returns for more love-making from this guy even if she goes off the fucking Pill!
I started crying midway. I wish I met someone as Kyle to love, he deserves it. Your writing is sublime. I'm lost for words and tears of complete empathy for both of them are streaming down my cheeks. You moved me greatly. Thank you !
Wow this is an incredibly moving story, incredibly bittersweet, hauntingly beautiful and extremely erotic. An exquisite vintage