All Comments on 'Rent is Due Ch. 01'

You've got a nice idea here, but it was so quick that I was left feeling like Katie, even hornier but ultimately unsatisfied! Was this intentional? Deliberately setting your reader up?

Chapter two has already been written and is just awaiting approval. I'm trying to build the sexual tension with my story, chapter by chapter. Eventually there will be a happy ending, as with any good erotic tale.

On the edge of my seat, waiting and hoping for more. What a fun story.

Really enjoyed the first chapter of this new series. The blowjob was deliciously written and I can't wait to see what Katie gets up to as the series goes on. Keep writing!

Sex for rent is a favourite theme of mine. This is a great story. Looking forward to more.