All Comments on 'Rented Whore'

A very good story! Technically, it was well written and grammatically correct, with just a few spelling & editing errors. Overall, it has good characterizations and a plausible plot, with the willing degradation of our lovely heroine providing just enough of a twist to keep it interesting. Very hot sex scenes--you either have been a busy girl or you have a vivid imagination! Keep up the good work.

Great erotica. Sizzling sex scenes. This author really knows how to describe in vivid terms every sexual situation.

You story does make one feel abit hard and sexy!

Loved this. Well written and very exciting. Took me a few orgasms to get through it all. ;)

A lady that can't get enough!

i want this to be me. xoxo

J

Well written with a lot interesting visions of what was happening. Lol.

I started out unsure about this story.. I have done many gangbangs myself. One six hour evening I did 40 strangers at a porn theater. There are pics on the internet of me doing so. Anyway, initially, I was put off by the main character, Ryanna. Her carefully cultivated social circle, etc., painted the picture of a manipulative person devoid of likeability. But, as I read on, I began to enjoy the story and to like Ryanna. There aren't many women who do something like what is described. I know because I have done it and heard from women observers, over and over, how they envy me and wish they could do what I do. I always reply "It's just sex. Take off your clothes, relax, and join me". But, they never do. They prefer to be voyeurs to life rather than diving in and enjoying it like they wish they could. I never understand their fear, but whatever. Anyway, great story. It was well written and each scene's image came easily to mind. Thanks for writing. Suzie