All Comments on 'Repairing the Past'

by All Red

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FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissy30 days ago

Lovely sweet tale ….. changing the past may sometimes not a bad idea ….. but it needs two and love and trust and awareness and mindfulness and some more

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Randee2058Randee2058almost 7 years ago
Beautiful🌹

That was so easily visualized while reading. It honestly made me cry! It was so moving.

5🌟's

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Good read not rushed had a flow to it not jagged and jumbled like so many

P.LighthouseP.Lighthousealmost 12 years ago
Very good!

I liked your story very much.

Its a long story, but that was necessary to reach its final destination: Lust and love!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
not enough

Too muich background not enough sex

All RedAll Redover 16 years agoAuthor
A message from All Red

Many thanks to all the readers of my stories who have been so kind as to leave such possitive comments and a very special thank you to those who have sent me their very kind good wishes during my recent and very long period of ill health. The long periods of treatment are now hopefully at an end and I have now started writing again. I hope to post some new stories soon and am working on some further chapters to some of the existing ones.

Love to you all,

All Red xxxx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nice

Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
best...

...lezzy story ever! Where do they go from here?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good Work

That was incredible i hope your writing a chapter 2 maybe 3 please continue with the incredible writing.

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I am a 100% gay girl who likes to have a good time, and like my partners to have the same. I have been writing for a few years now and under a pen name have had much work published. My erotic writings are for pleasure only and not done on a commercial basis.