All Comments on 'Repent Ch. 02'

Absolutely hot from start to finish. Well written and I suspect before this story is over the monsignor may have a role to play. I hope so! Great job of witing love your style as well as your story.

Being a BDSM lover and having a fetish for Nun's I think you did very well, I do lookforward to seeing your next installment

Great Story! The nuns were never like that! At least I don't think they were! But, then, they are human. Look forward to more along this line!

...please get an editor to help you with your sentence/paragraph construction and spellings. e.g. pre-pair should be prepare, my self should be one word, plus avoid repetition of words in the same paragraph...'was getting dressed. Damien dressed quickly...' These detract from your obviously furtive sexual imagination and its resultant imagery. Please write more, but how about a little more help to make sure you give us the best of you?

P. Grimm (another struggling author who also makes mistakes, so please take this with the care intended).