by PericulumFabula17
Well, agreed, it has some lengths and the deception and descent into slavery theme is a bit obvious pretty soon. But IMHO
/1 it is really one off the better long and entertaining BDSM stories and
/2 there is no reason to bitch about the category / consensuality as they signed up for this.
Thank You for creating and sharing Your story. W'd love to read a sequel.
All the Best, Simon
You have a real talent to create a setting. Great story. I like it.
Really enjoyed this. Looking forward to the continued humiliation of the girls. One request PLEASE don't spoil this and give it a happy ending.
Lori should be allowed to get away with her treachery. Perhaps she could be written as a procurer for Edith or even her daughter.
Finally now their fate is sealed I guess we can get into some serious humiliating mistreatment.
Well done indeed....SmCyber.
Good world building. I would find a way to get them to Cat III, perhaps threatening to split them up. Also, I think Lori should get her comeuppance. Great foundation please continue. Finally Delores needs to be sold.
i really like where this story is heading. cant wait for the rest to come out
Please tell us when the next parts are coming out? Will Lori makes things worse? will the bank manager who tried to help come back via lori? will they be forced to upgrade to Level 3?
I plan to have a few new chapters posted at the end of July.
I'm submitting a new chapter today (7/26/2018). It should be published within the week.
This is one of the best written series I've seen in a while. Please continue.
I very much enjoyed "adventures of a mailgirl", and this offering is, though darker in tone, a very good read. The story benefits from providing a good background of the current world/US financial situation, and slave laws. I personally like the first-person account by one of the protagonists. Also, the author devotes energy to each aspect of the versatile, well-fledged story, from the exciting chase scene to the lusty sex scenes, and the detailed humiliation of the auction.