All Comments on 'Reprogramming Erika Ch. 02'

Hopefully it should be out sometime in the next day or so.

Wow what a great story! I hope you have many parts to this story.It sure has started off with a slow building excitment which keeps me interested. Great job!!

I've got a start on Chapter Four, but not sure where I want to take the story line after Chapter Three. I would appreciate any thoughts from readers after reading Chapter Three about what they would like to see. I would be very grateful for any input.

I appreciate the feedback.

On a side note, I do my own editing and I thought I got out all the errors but spotted two in reading through this chapter. Dammit!

An extremely minor error: the top to the convertible is "put down" twice. I assume he was just so flummoxed by his niece that he actually put it up before entering the garage and narrated it wrong, so it was HIS error, not the author's!