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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
TO CALL THIS WRITING WOULD BE A KINDNESS - GET AN EFFECTIVE EDITOR OR QUIT

1. with (a) military haircut

2. look of recognition inside of his eyes (CLUMSY)

3. poison used during the death penalty to stop hearts (CLUMSY)

4. Once the governor's heart attack ceased (CLUMSY)

5. She was then struck in the side with a push dagger (most commonly known as: push knife, fist knife, push dirk, or T-handled knife) is a short knife having the design similar to the letter "T (VERY POORLY EXPRESSED)

5. the cleaner would be sent in to clean up (SLOPPY)

6. Governor of Houston Texas (JUST HOUSTON????)

7. remember somethings (some things)

8. Psychologist Mandy (psychologist)

9. talking in V.I.P (where is this????)

10. great to be apart (a part)

11. hiding in plain site (sight)

12. Diva mode (diva)

13. IPhone (iPhone)

14. walking up to (a) huge African Guy (guy)

15. completic (complected)

16. tequila sunrise martini (W H A T ????)

17. My drink and I enter upon the dance floor (CLUMSY)

18. Mandy is a beautiful Indonesian which is just an observation albeit not a sexual one (CONNECTION BETWEEN STATEMENTS????)

19. arduous velocity (CLUMSY)

20. being on an Island (island)

21. Virgin Wool (virgin wool)

22. internet (Internet)

23. under pass (underpass)

24 - 25. 12 bedrooms with their own bathroom (bathrooms) television, air condition (air conditioning)

26. livingroom (living room)

27. atleast (at least)

28. released is cock (his)

29. vegan leather (???? NOT MADE FROM AN ANIMAL)

30. RIDING CROP is on one end. The RIDING CROP consists of a round leather disc she used to swat Rachel. The RIDING CROP worked like a paddle to spank her rear and other erogenous zones. But the RIDING CROP has a much smaller surface area (45 words RIDING CROP 4 times)

31. malice (mace????)

32. let lavender condition soak in (conditioner)

33. Rachel to lay flat (lie)

34. felt alot (a lot)

35. layed (laid)

36. sat (-inside of) (in) a chaise

37. Breasts-Waist-Hips (breasts-waist-hips)

38. dingy (dinghy)

39. forget somethings (some things)

over pass (overpass )

40 Bobbi pins (Bobby)

41. she stroke my palm (stroked)

42. volt of electric currents simmer (VERY POORLY EXPRESSED)

43. calls me anything accept when (except)

44. Jet ski (jet)

45. panick (panic)

46. retrieving Intel (intel)

47. its grimy (it’s)

48. missed laying inside my arms (lying)

49. I was an how (and)

50. a king-sized bed in a grimy treehouse (naturally it was not dirty!!!!)

51. Once I opened my eyes I was taking to a different floor (taken)

52. a hot shower in a treehouse in the Brazilian jungle (WHY NOT????)

53. E-mail me the coordinations (coordinates)

54. four Wheeler (wheeler)

55. girls life (girl’s)

56. left the building what she prayed was undetected (VERY POORLY EXPRESSED)

57. Once done inside she made sure the two jet skis she ordered from the village had arrived. They hadn't yet (TWO CONTRADICTORY STATEMENTS)

58. Dinnerware (dinnerware)

59. Once she landed in Ethiopia she took a helicopter to the coordinates Michelle gave then she landed. (MICHELE IS IN A BRAZILIAN RAINFOREST!!!!)

60. with bath wic and vestibule (????)

61. office (-is) are two guest

62. I lay down (lie)

63. taken you too far to fast (too)

64. seem like your dead (you’re)

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