All Comments on 'Rescuing a Damsel in Distress'

Great job, you definitely have a way with words and know how to spin a plot with just enough story and sex to make it interesting.

Any thoughts on posting this on celebritystorylibrary.prophpbb.com, I'm sure you'd get much more feedback there, than on here.

Only thing I would've like was for you to include some story codes at the start, so we know what kind of sex is in it and for you to actually write which celebrity is featured, 'cause I have no idea what Bonnie it is you're writing about?

I find the ending too flat! For example: her angry boyfriend could have searched for her and through the car rental lease could have found her general location and then narrowed down her location, leading to a show-down, which is finally resolved by the bloodhound levelling the former boyfriend and standing on his chest, baring her teeth and drooling on him...

A small epilogue would have been nice maybe with the first anniversary where she gives him a plated knight in shining armor card

Without reservation, I THROUGHLY ENJOYED IT !

THANK YOU ! ! !